Not bad.
Don't know if you actually did this yourself or just used a really nice high quality synth. If you did this yourself, then I would change it to a 10/10. Very nice.
Not bad.
Don't know if you actually did this yourself or just used a really nice high quality synth. If you did this yourself, then I would change it to a 10/10. Very nice.
thanks man. well yeah the guitar is by myself. i'm dirt poor and can't play synth so i wouldn't buy a high quality synth. the only thing thats synth is the MIDI keyboard for the violin in the beginning. that keyboard was the only overdub. the rest is just one long take of finger picking.
Constructive criticism
The beginning does need work, I don't think you should start out with the bassline with the minor lead. You've got an okay lead as well. You're missing that essence that makes it dance though. It's too simple, needs more going on. But at that it's a good start. Most people cannot even produce a decent lead for dance. Hope I helped.
Thank you I will remember that for the next one!
You have my respect.
Now this is the kind of stuff that belongs in the top 10!
I only give it a 9/10 because of LACK OF BASS, MOAR!
5/5.
:) thanks for the honest review! ima see if i can edit the mp3 b4 it hits 3k views
4/5
Well, I liked it a lot. It was very nice. Only a few tweaks need to be made. At 3:12 I think it could use a little more help. I also think there could be some choir in this, it would sound very nice.
Thanks for the Review!
A choir would be epic, for sure. However, my current choir samples are about as good as choir samples from a 1980's Keyboard. If I can find a way to make it work, I'll totally start implementing that.
Thanks!
Love the tune.
God you have no idea how bad I want to remix this outside of 8bit.
If you're asking for my permission, I implore you to! Remix away :P I'd be flattered. And I'm glad you love it.
This is ok.
But just curious to how this made it to the front page? This is good don't get me wrong, but a 31 second loop isn't really worthy of a front page in place of a full song.
Sorry you feel that way.
Very nice.
I enjoyed this. For a doom song it had very good climax, etc. Usually doom songs don't have a climax really. They just kind of end. I wish you would finish this!
Oh, I will. I like the song too, so I'll definitely be doing some finishing sometime. I'll let you know how it goes! :D
TheAswomeThingy, I don't understand...
Why exactly are you on newgrounds again?
I thought the same thing... sometimes (like happened with my account) random people access the internet and no one knows what will happen! But, nonetheless it's nothing to worry about. Thanks for the review.
-frootza
Not bad.
I enjoyed this. Very good remix, I would recommend replacing the clap with something else. Just seems out of place to me.
But still, this was awesome.
Thanks for the input. I don't find anything wrong with the hand clap, personally. Or it might be because I made this entire thing in the past few hours and just haven't cared enough to notice yet. The only thing I don't like is the terrible MIDI timpani roll at the end, but nothing I can do about that.
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